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Once upon
a time...
  

Brainstorm
(Brain Drain)
How do I
get ideas?
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magazines/newspapers/periodicals/CD-ROM
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conduct an interview
based on your topic
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media - radio, tv,
internet
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experiences
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movies
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music
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visual art - observing
or creating
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dreams
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memories
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discussion and
brainstorming
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responding to literature
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role playing
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research
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imagination
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personal interest
inventories
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class interest inventory
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What are
some ways to brainstorm?
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free writing
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journaling/diary
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lists
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visualization
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brainstorming -
individually or as a
group
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webbing/mapping/clustering
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graphic organizers
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topic or word chart
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Click
HERE and
HERE for some graphic organizers for
brainstorming.

Rough Draft
(Sloppy
Copy)
Tips
When Going From Brainstorming To Writing
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Be selective in
the ideas
that you include.
You don't
have to include
everything that
was in your prewriting!
Pick your best ideas.
Make sure they relate to
each other and your
topic.
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WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!
Don't stop once you
start writing. Revising
and editing
come later. Just let
the ideas flow. (Don't
worry about spelling!)
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Don't count words, ask
your teacher how long it
should be or when
it is done. When YOU
feel that you have
completed your ideas,
you are then ready to go
to the next stage.
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HOLD IT! Before going
to the next stage, make
sure you have
enough content to work
with. If you feel that
you are lacking content,
go back to your
prewriting for more
ideas and details.
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Revise and Edit
(Goof
Proof)
Revising
Is...
- making decisions about how
you want to improve your writing
- looking at your writing from
a different point of view
- picking places where your
writing could be clearer, more
interesting, more informative
and more convincing.
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Editing
Is...
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spelling
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capitalization
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punctuation
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grammar
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sentence structure
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subject/verb agreement
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consistent verb tense
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word usage
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Methods
of Revising
A.R.R.R. - This
method allows you to make four
types of changes.
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Adding |
What else does the
reader need to know? |
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Rearranging |
Is the information in
the most logical and
most effective order? |
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Removing |
What extra details or
unnecessary bits of
information are in this
piece
of writing? |
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Replacing |
What words or details
could be replaced by
clearer or stronger
expressions? |
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Revising
Tips: Ask Yourself These Questions
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Can you read it out loud
without stumbling?
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Does every word and
action count? There
should be a reason why a
character acts or speaks
in a certain way.
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Is the series of events
logical? Do they
relate?
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Is it clear what your
goal or your main
character's goal is
throughout the piece of
writing?
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Are vivid/descriptive
words used to describe
characters and/or
events?
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Is your train of thought
clear?
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Do you use a variety of
verbs throughout the
piece? (Something
instead of "SAID")
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Are you using the same
words and phrases over
and over again?
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Is there a catchy
introduction? Does the
conclusion leave the
reader thinking?
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Are transitional words
used throughout?
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Is there a strong hook
and lead-in?
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Are all sentences
complete or are there
sentence fragments?
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Is a vivid mental
picture created in the
reader's mind?
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Have you completed
sentence expansion
where necessary? (NO
"HE RAN!")
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Did you use a thesaurus?
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Click
HERE to view our color-coded Writers
Checklist that we use in
Mrs. Gold's Classroom.

Partner Edit
(Smart
Part)
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Read your partner's writing and
correct any mistakes you see
(spelling, grammar, etc...)
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Tell your partner three things
you liked about their writing.
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Tell your partner three things
you'd change about their
writing. (adding more detail,
more exciting
introduction/ending, etc...) BE
SPECIFIC! Don't just say "You
need more detail." Give them a
specific example of where
they could add detail and what
they could write.
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Teacher
Conference
This is
my time to read over your writing and give
you tips.

Publish
(Final
Fame)
HERE are 98 creative ways to publish
your writing!

...and
they lived happily ever after! |